Sunday, September 26, 2010

Bahman's letter to Sue,

Dear Sue.
Cyrus cylinder is 3 months in Iran. The British takes many reassures from all countries the world. Africa’s countries, Iran, India, Mesr and etc. it is a bad work. They mustn’t take our reassures. Constitution is better than a law that it wrote by man (king), but the law’s writers must be an honest mans. I thing a parliament and a king or leader is better than a parliament. However, members of parliament must be an honest mans and a honest leader must administer on the members. However, the law has been widely criticized by people. Maybe corruption has been lesser. It is a dream. Any governments aren’t very honest, but sometimes are governments that they are better that before governments. In Iran history we have many examples of good governments. For example Cyrus, Karimkhan, King Khashayr, King Esmael, Grean Darush and etc. If you live in a good period of history, you are a lucky man. I glory that the first charter of human rights wrote by Cyrus.
Yes, I can help you if you tell me those songs about Shahryar poet.
Take care,
Your friend, Bahman

1 comment:

Sue said...

Dear Friend, we have a saying in America, "Mind your own business." I'm afraid that we don't always pay attention to this ourselves, but it is a good thought for any country, I think. Britain used to be what is called "a colonial power" and they would run rough-shod over countries they took over. However, we can't live in the past, but must plan to do what Cyrus would do in the future.

Cyrus was a great king, not because he won battles but because he had the milk of human kindness in him. A leader without that is dangerous and power hungry.

Corrections: reassures??? Do you mean treasures?
2. "It is a bad work." Perhaps better to say "They should not do this."
3. "honest mans" Instead say "honest men"

Don't be upset by mistakes, Bahman. You are getting to the point where you are really beginning to share ideas and stories in English. I love to read your letters. I'll look up the songs I would like the words to as soon as I get a few minutes.

Your friend, Sue

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