This man change the world for always . He was very simple , special in life and statment and This was his art .Becoas of this he was popular between people and now he is too .he really was a heavenly man .His name is EMAM KHOMEINY or we say spirite of God .
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Dear Hamed, I like the style of your writing. Here are some suggestions:
He was very simple--special in life and statement, and this was his art. Because of this, he was popular among his people, and he still is popular. He really was a heavenly man, and his name is Emam Khomeiny, or as we say, "The Spirit of God."
Watch spelling (because), periods and capitals when you change sentences. Commas are used to separate our thoughts within sentences. A dash can be used when you have an afterthought, as in "He was very simple--special..."
Study when to use capital letters: The beginning of sentences, the names of people or specific places, towns, countries, oceans, continents etc. There are others, but start with these.
Your friend, Sue
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