I wrote this letter in free time in university between circut 2 class and Eloctronic 1.
For me english language is very nice and when I write to english, I have nice feel but I have a peroblem. This problem is vocabolury. I do not know many vocabolury.
I have a other problem that it is important for me.I do not like to write simple object, of course I know it is mistake.I like to write objects such as God, love, nutare hormony, creation, world nice and without war and things like these.
Of course I say sgain I know that these are hard. I like that my teachers,you and mr.T help me and I learn early.
I know that you are busy these days and you have many student.
thank you for your answers.
In end, I like you say my mistake and If this mistake be many, I do not sad and I continiu again. In life this is my style.
BY HAMED
1 comment:
Hamed, In America we would call you 'a cool dude!' I find the subjects you like to discuss are fine. Let me suggest that you get a good Farsi to English dictionary, if you can and I think that will help.
I see you are using Capitals to begin sentences and punctuation at the end of your sentences and that is very good. You are getting some structure.
Let us look at your letter:
Sentence l is OK but I would say 'the university.
"For me, the English language is very nice, and when I write in English (to is a direction, like "to the store)I have a nice feeling, but I have a problem: The problem is vocabulary. I do not know many vocabulary words. (try to learn so many words every week)
I have another problem that is important to me. I do not like to write about simple things, which of course may be a mistake. I like to write about things such as God, love, nature, harmony, creation, and a peaceful world without war and things like that."
Check your letter against what I wrote above and see what changes I made. Perhaps T can explain why I changed certain words.
The rest of your letter is very good, except you are speaking of more than one student, so it would be students.
Your last two sentences; Let me rewrite them:
"In conclusion, I would like you to tell me my mistakes even if there are many. It won't make me sad, and I will try again. In life this is my style."
And it is a great, great style. You're my kind of person, Hamid. Never give up.
Your friend, Sue
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