Monday, October 18, 2010

Niloofar's letter

Dear sue

We could read your comment last night.
Thank you very much.

Please forgive me if I answer you late.
If you remember me I am a engineer in a factory and I am very busy during the day every day and I am very tired at night but I like to write letters to you and read your letters.


Take cure of your self



Niloofar

1 comment:

Sue said...

Dear Niloofar,

You sound very busy, and I admire you for studying English on top of all you have to do.
Your letter uses very good English. However, the first sentence needs some explanation:

Read - I read (rhymes with bead) your letter, I read (rhymes with bed) your letter yesterday, I will read (rhymes with bead) your letter tomorrow. Read is a word that can be past, present or future. The spelling is the same, but it is pronounced differently. It would be better to say "We read your comment last night. I don't think you need a 'could' in this sentence.
Ask T if you don't understand this.
last sentence> Take care (not cure)

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