Thursday, September 23, 2010

Hi Mrs Sue

I am sorry for writting my letter late. I and my parents went to an attractive trip last week. We went to Katalehkhour cave. It is in Zanjan province. It is 120 milion years old. There are beautiful ice forms in that. For example: lion's claw, elephant's foot, bride and groom and etc..
I hope that you go there too and you enjoy.
I am reading a book called the Prophet by Jebran khalil jebran. It is a very good book. I found peace when I read it. Did you read books of Jebran khalil jebran?
saeede.

1 comment:

Sue said...

My dear Saeede, Your trip sounds like it was fun and also very interesting. Such forms of nature make us appreciate the nature around us and its abilities.

I have not read The Prophet but it is an important book in America and since you are reading it, I think I will get it and read it. I understand that it is a very thoughtful book that deals with his life in America and his longing for his home in Lebanon. I admire those who are able to make such a cultural connection. Tell me what you like about the book.

Your friend, Sue

P.S. Your letter is very understandable, and I have a couple of suggestions:
1. Always put yourself last when you say things such as, "My parents and I went..." It is considered good manners in English.

2. Verbs. You are talking about the future, so you would say, "I hope that you will go there and that you will enjoy it."

Past tense: "You went." Present tense: "You go." Future Tense: "You will go."

Your friend, Sue

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